Here we go!
It's about time, the nice weather is coming! After a freezing winter, the sun is about to take over here in Italy. Do not misunderstand me, I love the snow, the ice and the starry-winter sky, but in these days I start to smell the perfumes of the flowers which are about to bloom and I see the first bees flying over my head; all these things are giving me new energies and I fell like going out every day by bicicle and with my dog. I fell like sitting in the garden reading a book in the sun. It's matter of weeks and than the climate will be temperate and it will be possible to go to the lake sunbathing. Welcome back springtime!
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Here we go!
It's about time, the nice weather is coming! After a freezing winter, the sun is about to take over here in Italy. Do not misunderstand me, I love the snow, the ice and the starry-winter sky, but in these days I start to smell the perfumes of the flowers which are about to bloom and I see the first bees flying over my head; all these things are giving me new energy and I feel like going out every day by bicycle and with my dog. I feel like sitting in the garden reading a book in the sun. It's a matter of weeks and than the climate will be temperate and it will be possible to go to the lake sunbathing. Welcome back, springtime!***
Hi Nicola,
Well done! This is a lovely piece of writing. You made very small mistakes, and I loved how poetic some of it sounded -- especially 'starry-winter sky'. Keep up the great work! Let me know if you have any questions.
All the best,
Julie
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