The young people and technology.
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Actually, most of the young people, if it wasn't all of them, are spending their time on internet a lot; they have become addicted to internet and technology! The internet has become a very important part in their lives. If they want to find out about any information, they quickly go and research about it and books have become less usage in this part. The most beautiful thing about using it is making the world like a small village. The internet allows them to exchange their cultures, languages, traditions and even their thoughts. They use it to grow their knowledge. In addition to that, they can develop their talents or even discover them through using it. The new generation of youth may grow up digital! Despite all these features, technology has also disadvantages. Unfortunately, some people use the internet to corrupt and destroy young people, and young people can influenced easily. To face this, we must establish organizations to increase the awareness of young people against the dangers of the Internet and technology.
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''My teacher asked me to write on this topic, so I hope you can correct my writing!''
Most young people
, if not all of them, are spending their time on the internet a lot; they have become addicted to the internet and technology! The internet has become a very important part of their lives. If they want to find out about any information, they quickly go and research it, and books are being used less. The most beautiful thing about using it is that it is making the world like a small village. The internet allows them to exchange their cultures, languages, traditions and even their thoughts. They use it to grow their knowledge. In addition to that, they can develop their talents or even discover them through using it. The new generation of youth may grow up digital! Despite all these features, technology also has disadvantages. Unfortunately, some people use the internet to corrupt and destroy young people, and young people can be influenced easily. To face this, we must establish organizations to increase the awareness of young people against the dangers of the Internet and technology. Thanks for your time!!Wow, great job!
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