Jane Eyre, my happy coincidence.
Jane Eyre it is a very popular book.
it was written during the Victorian period by Charlotte Bronte.
this story that launched me into falling in love with literature
I know maybe a lot of people has been studied that story in high school or university.
but I was just bought a book called (Moasic) for university students.
I was studying a chapter it was including the story about Jane Eyre, when I Read a summary of the book then went to buy and read it...
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if I had described this book I would describe it unexpected as a happy confidence as well
Jane I thought was an amazingly strong woman as a character
I really actually enjoyed it while I was reading.
I was falling in love day to day, I can't leave this book from my hand, I was engaged with her, her opinion, her dreams, aspects of her personality, How much she has a clear opinion, how much she don,t fear about telling the truth although all these attitudes
when I was reading through that pages I felt that something inside me has changed,
that happiness comes from yourself but if you don't know yourself and don't understand your self how are you going to be happy? , another person cannot be creating this happiness < if you can't find that peace within your self.
I think this is an essence of Jane Eyre, That what she said between the lines, the reason why I love her character.
I felt disappointed at the end of the last page I felt like he became a daily companion morning and evening
His words deep and difficult for a person who learn English but I translated a lot and I was excited and was motivated by the details of Romance (: I believe passionately that is the great way to learn.
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Jane, I thought, was an amazingly strong woman as a character.
I really actually enjoyed it while I was reading.
I was falling in love day to day -- I couldn't put the book down. I was engaged with her, her opinions, her dreams, aspects of her personality, how much she has a clear opinion, how much she don,t doesn't fear about telling the truth although even though she has all these attitudes. (I think you were talking about attitudes that she has, not attitudes that other people will have toward her for speaking, thinking or behaving in ways that they don't expect a woman to).
When I was reading through that those pages, I felt that something inside me had changed,
that happiness comes from yourself, but if you don't know yourself and don't understand your self, how are you going to be happy? Another person cannot create this happiness if you can't find that peace within your self.
I think this is an essence of Jane Eyre, that this is what she said between the lines; this is the reason why I love her character.
I felt disappointed at the end of the last page. I felt like he * became a daily companion morning and evening
His * words were deep and difficult for a person who is still learning English, but I translated a lot and I was excited and was motivated by the details of Romance (: I believe passionately that is the great way to learn.
* I am confused about who you are talking about here when you say he/his. Are you talking about the author? If so, then I think it would be best to say, "I felt like the author became a daily companion..." or "I felt like the author, Charlotte Brontë, became a daily companion..." Charlotte Brontë was a woman, so sentences after that could refer to the author as "she" or "her". (Or maybe you were talking about Jane Eyre and accidentally used "he" and "his" instead of "she"?)
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Your essay reminds me that there are many great classic American novels that I have never read. We were assigned to read some in high school and college, but there was not enough time to read all of them...and it did not occur to me in later years to read them on my own just for the pleasure. However, when my son has been assigned some of those novels for English classes, I have chosen to read several of them, too, so that I can discuss them with him. Frankenstein and Pride and Prejudice are two of those novels that I am now very glad that I have read. Perhaps I should take the initiative to read Jane Eyre, as it seems to be a novel that many people are especially fond of.
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Jane Eyre, my happy coincidence.
"Jane Eyre" is a very popular book.It was written during the Victorian period by Charlotte Bronte.
This is the story that launched me into falling in love with literature.
I know that maybe a lot of people have studied that story in high school or university, but I have just bought a book called "Moasic" for university students.
I was studying a chapter in it which included something about Jane Eyre, then I read a summary of the book and went on to buy it and read it...
.
If I had to describe this book I would describe it unexpectedly as having* a happy confidence as well.
Jane, I thought, was an amazingly strong woman as a character, and
I really actually enjoyed it while I was reading.
I was falling in love day to day, and I couldn't leave the book out of my hand. I was engaged with her, her opinions, her dreams, aspects of her personality, how much was her clear opinion, how much she dared to tell the truth through all these attitudes.
When I was reading through those pages I felt that something inside me changed.
That happiness comes from yourself but if you don't know yourself and don't understand yourself how are you going to be happy? Someone else cannot create this happiness if you cannot find that peace within yourself.
I think that this is the essence of Jane Eyre, that is what she said between the lines, the reason why I love her character.
I felt disappointed at the end of the last page. I felt like (s?)he became a daily companion morning and evening.
Her(?)His words were deep and difficult for a person who learns English but I translated a lot and I was excited and was motivated by the details of Romance (: I believe passionately that is the great way to learn.
very well written! And a great book, too.
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Jane Eyre, my happy coincidence.
Jane Eyre it is a very popular book.It was written during the Victorian period by Charlotte Bronte.
This is the story that launched me into falling in love with literature.
I know maybe a lot of people has been have studied that story in high school or university. *
But I was just bought a book called (Moasic) for university students.
I was studying a chapter it was including that included the story about Jane Eyre; when I read a summary of the book, then I went to buy and read it...
.
If I had described this book I would describe it unexpected as a happy confidence as well. (do you mean The Mosaic book? Or Jane Eyre?) I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to say in this sentence. Perhaps... "If I described how I found Jane Eyre, I would call it a happy coincidence." Or maybe: "If I were to describe this book, I would say that its plot is about a happy coincidence." Or: "If I described this book, I'd say it's all about happy coincidences."
* It seems a little odd to combine together "I know" (extreme certainty) and "maybe" (very weak certainty). I suggest instead: "I know a lot of people probably have studied that story..."
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Somatchy, I am out of time to write more now, but I will try to remember to return later to finish correcting your notebook entry.
Your enthusiasm for both literature and learning are very clear. I enjoy reading what you have written :-)
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