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Planes Planes have had great influences on our lives. I will explain them. First, planes have the ability to go around the world very quickly. We can travel to even South America from Japan no more than 24 hours. Japanese became able to go and see the famous spots in South America including Iguaz, Machupichu, Uyuni, etc. I had been to Iguaz in Argentin five years ago and felt moved in this enormous view. Second, All of the people in the world can communicate and transport with each other. It is easy for us to buy the books written in foreign languages. I sometimes buy the English books of Orthopedics which included more and new information than Japanese books. Transportation from foreign countries such as America to Japan has been made easy and fast by planes. However, we cannot look over the accident of planes. Every year, many peoples are killed by planes accident such as bird attack, engine trouble, communication error and so on. We should continue to make effort in decreasing the number of accident. Despite this point, planes made our lives very comfortable.

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Planes

Planes have had great influences on our lives. I will explain them. First, planes have the ability to go around the world very quickly. We can even travel to even South America from Japan in no more than 24 hours. Japanese people became able to go and see the famous spots in South America including Iguaz, Machupichu, Uyuni, etc. I had been to Iguaz in Argentin five years ago and felt moved in this by the enormous view. Second, All all of the people in the world can communicate and transport with send things to each other. It is easy for us to buy the books written in foreign languages. I sometimes buy the English books of about Orthopedics which included include more and new newer information than Japanese books. Transportation from foreign countries such as America to Japan has been made easy and fast by planes. However, we cannot look over overlook the accident of planes plane accidents. Every year, many peoples people are killed by planes accident plane accidents such as bird attack attacks, engine trouble, communication error and so on. We should continue to make an effort in decreasing the number of accidents. Despite this point, planes made our lives very comfortable.
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