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TOEFL Writing practice I think that living in a dormitory is better for students than living in a private apartment. I have two reasons: convenience and c ooperativeness. The students in a dormitory go to school easier than in a private apartment because a dormitory is usually near the college. In result, it costs lesser to go to school too. Additionally, the students in a dormitory can get the ability to cooperate with friends that live in the same dormitory. I think the ability to cooperate with others is the most important for students. A people can not do something without the cooperation of the others. Living in a dormitory with the friends can train this skill. However, living in a dormitory sometimes limits the student's activity. There are some rules the students should obey. They may feel ill at ease. Despite this disadvantage, living in a dormitory is better for the students than living in a private apartments.

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TOEFL Writing Practice  [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

I think that living in a dormitory is better for students than living in a private apartment. I have two reasons: convenience and cooperativeness. The students in a dormitory go to school easier than in a private apartment because a dormitory is usually near the college. As a result, it costs less to go to school, too. Additionally, the students in a dormitory can have the ability to cooperate with friends that live in the same dormitory. I think the ability to cooperate with others is the most important thing* for students. A person** can not do something without the cooperation of others. Living in a dormitory with friends can train this skill. However, living in a dormitory sometimes limits the student's activity. There are some rules the students should obey and/so they may feel ill at ease. Despite this disadvantage, living in a dormitory is better for the students than living in private apartments.

[* Or: "with others is most important for students."

** Or this sentence can start with: "People can not do ...".]

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