Topic: Holi
Holi is the festival of colours. People of all age groups celebrate holi with colours , water balloons. It marks the win of truth over evil . people forget their differences and enjoy with each other.
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Topic: Holi
Holi is the festival of colours. People of all ages celebrate Holi with colours and water balloons. The celebration marks the victory of truth over evil. People forget their differences and enjoy it with one another.1
Topic: Holi
Holi is the festival of colours. People of all age groups celebrate holi with colours , water balloons. It marks the win of truth over evil . people forget their differences and enjoy with each other.Capital H for the name of the holiday
I would say, "enjoy it with each other"
Other possibilities are: "enjoy it together" or "have fun with each other."
I would use this word order: "truth's win over evil"
Oher possibilities are: "victory of truth over evil" or "triumph of truth over evil."
Anju,
What you wrote was very good and easy to understand.
I am a Spanish teacher, but on Friday we watched a video about Holi in class because a student asked me a question about it. They found it very interesting. They are 13 and 14 years old students in an American public school, and some of them had never heard of the holiday. Although, we do have students from India or whose parents are from India as well.
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