我的女神：Taylor Swift
我的女神是Taylor Swift。他是我的最喜欢音乐家。我喜欢他因为他写他的歌。我去过四场他的演出。但是我今年感到难过因为我可能不能去他的演出。今年我会住中国。我希望Taylor来中国！
My idol is Taylor Swift. She is my favorite singer. I like her because she writes her own songs. I have been to four of her concerts. But this year I’m sad because I probably cannot go to her concert. This year I will be living in China. I hope Taylor comes to China!
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我的女神：Taylor Swift
我的女神是Taylor Swift。他是我的最喜欢女歌手。我喜欢她因为她写自已的歌曲。我去过四场她的演唱會。但是我今年感到难过因为我可能不能去她的演唱會。今年我会住中国。我希望Taylor會来中国！My idol is Taylor Swift. She is my favorite singer. I like her because she writes her own songs. I have been to four of her concerts. But this year I’m sad because I probably cannot go to her concert. This year I will be living in China. I hope Taylor comes to China!
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我的女神：Taylor Swift
我的女神是Taylor Swift。他她是我的最喜欢音乐家歌手。我喜欢她是他因为他写他的歌因为她自己创作给自己唱。我去看过四场他她的演出(normally say 演唱会)。但是今年我感到难过的是因为我可能不能去不了他她的演出。今年我会住在中国生活。我希望Taylor来中国！My idol is Taylor Swift. She is my favorite singer. I like her because she writes her own songs. I have been to four of her concerts. But this year I’m sad because I probably cannot go to her concert. This year I will be living in China. I hope Taylor comes to China!
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更地道些应该这样说：泰勒·斯威夫特是我的女神。她是我的最喜欢歌手（she=她，he=他,musician=音乐家)。我喜欢她因为她有很多原创歌曲（she writes her own songs当然也可以直译为：她自己写歌)。我去过四场她的演唱会(演出is more similar to the word performance )。但今年可能去不了她的演唱会了，难过（原句也可以但这样说更fluently ）。今年我会（also could be 将，=will）住在(kind of continuous aspect)中国。我希望Taylor来中国！
My idol is Taylor Swift. She is my favorite singer. I like her because she writes her own songs. I have been to four of her concerts. But this year I’m sad because I probably cannot go to her concert. This year I will be living in China. I hope Taylor comes to China!
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Taylor Swift是我的偶像。她是我最喜欢的歌手，喜欢她是因为她自己写歌。我去过她的四场演出。但是我今年感到难过因为我可能再也不能去看她的演出了。今年我会去中国。我希望Taylor来中国！ My idol is Taylor Swift. She is my favorite singer. I like her because she writes her own songs. I have been to four of her concerts. But this year I’m sad because I probably cannot go to her concert. This year I will be living in China. I hope Taylor comes to China!
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