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My Father Today is my father's birthday,I want him happy.He is a good person, rigorous,honesty and helpful,and aways get up early to doing exercises in the morning .He likes children,however,he aways be strict with us,such as study and actions.He wants us know how could be polite to the others.In his mind,he thinks the body is very important that we should care about it.So he aways ask us to get up early to do exercises.what's more,he also care our country very much , which teachs me should be loyalty.I love China,I love dad. Wish you happy everyday!

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My Father.

Today it is my father's birthday,I want him to be happy.He is a good person,_rigorous, honest and helpful._He aways gets up early to do exercises in the morning .He loves his children,_however,_he is always strict with us_in such things as studies and behavior._He wants us know how to be polite to others._In his mind,_he thinks the body is very important, that we should care about it,_so he always asks us to get up early to do exercises._What's more,_he also cares about our country very much, which teaches me that we should be loyal._I love China,_I love you, dad.
Wish you happiness every_day!

**(_) Necessary spaces!

**You're a good daughter!

**Regards!! :D

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