Lost by my self
Sometimes I feel like a strange inside by my self.
Alone.
In a dark.
I don't know what to do when this happen.
So... I herd a voice.
That voice pecefull and sweet.
Well, I'm not alone anymore.
I'm alive.
And I can do anything.
I was poor.
But now I'm rich.
Rich of things that money can't buy.
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Sometimes I feel like a stranger inside by myself.
(or) Sometimes I feel strange inside myself
In the dark.
I don't know what to do when this happens.
So... I heard a voice.
A voice peaceful and sweet.
(or) That voice was peaceful and sweet.
Wonderful poem! :)
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Lost by my self
Sometimes I feel like a strange inside by myself.Alone.
In a darkness.
I don't know what to do when this happen.
So... I heard a voice.
That voice peaceful and sweet.
Well, I'm not alone anymore.
I'm alive.
And I can do anything.
I was poor.
But now I'm rich.
Rich of things that money can't buy.
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