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My son has an exam of English, Can you help me with his oral presentation? Part (II) Part (II) Another point in favor is that I always try to overcome myself, and in fact I achieve to get better, but for that reason I must be very constant in my personal training. I train five times per week and sometimes, when I am available, I train even six times. On the other hand, this technique must be monitored when training because we can be injured very easly due to the difficulties on this Kind of training. Reaching the top is not easy at all. I compete at a local level against other local boxes at friendly competitions. Crossfit games are at the top of all competition levels with the participation of the best crossfiters in the world. The winner is proclaimed the man or woman with the best physical condition in the world. In order to participate in this competition, I should dedicate a whole day, every day. I should eat special diets, and I should pass the first stages of the classification to be able to access. Being able to participate in the most important event of this kind is very difficult, but it is one of my little dreams. And honestly, making our dream come true is possible, we only need to make a big effort and to be confident. So, we never know!

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My son has an English exam, Can you help me with his oral presentation? Part (II)

Part (II)

Another point in my favour is that I always try to overcome improve / surpass myself and in fact I achieve continue to get better, but to do that for that reason I must be very constant in with my personal training. I train five times per week and sometimes, when I am available, I train even six times.

On the other hand,However, this technique must be monitored when we are training, because we can be injured very easily due to the difficulties on with this Kind of training.

Reaching the top is not easy at all. I compete at a local level against other local boxes ? (teams/ clubs)at friendly competitions.

Crossfit games are at the top of all competition levels with the participation of the best crossfiters competitors in the world. The winner is proclaimed the man or woman with the best physical condition in the world.

In order to participate in this competition, I should need to dedicate a whole day, every day. I should must eat special diets and I should pass the first stages of the classification to be able to access. enter/compete.

Being able to participate in the most important event of this kind is very difficult, but it is one of my little dreams.

And Honestly, making our dream come true is possible, we only need to make a big great effort and to be confident. So, we never know!

A very good essay. I made some alternative words in blue to make it  more natural.


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