hobby of historical persons
Hobby is possible work of all your life. The greatist english singer John Lennon had a main hobby is playing in guitar. In childhood he wholly dedicated himself in this case. And some time later he became a wideworld popular with his greatest band in history The Beatles. Also one great Russian an artist Isaac Levitan developed his talent of drawing in the deep childhood. Although he was from cheap family, he had a big desire to create. He became a famous in all our country and impress by him gorgeous works even nowadays.
In conclusion, hobby plays a big role in life of any person. That's important for development . Hobby is like your personal feature.
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hobby of historical persons
Hobby is the best possible work of all your life. The greatist english singer John Lennon had a main hobby of playing the guitar. In childhood he wholly dedicated himself his. And some time later he would became worldwide popular with the greatest band in history The Beatles. Also one great Russian, an artist Isaac Levitan, developed his talent of drawing in early childhood. Although he was from a poor family, he had a big desire to create. He became a famous in all our country and impresses with gorgeous works even nowadays.In conclusion, hobbies plays a big role in life of any person. That's important for development . Hobby is like your personal feature.
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Hobby is possible work of all your life [I think you mean: A hobby could become your life's work ]. The greatist greatest English english singer John Lennon had a main hobby; it was is playing in guitar. In childhood he wholly dedicated himself to this endeavor [ or passion or hobby ] in this case. And some time later he became popular worldwide [ or all over the world ] a wideworld popular playing with his the greatest band in history, The the Beatles. [ Paragraph break here.] Also one the great Russian an artist Isaac Levitan developed his talent of drawing in the deep early childhood. Although he was from cheap a poor family, he had a big [ big is correct but doesn't work as well as other words like "enormous" or "huge" ] desire to create. He became a famous in all our country and impress impressed many people with his by him gorgeous works, ; even nowadays, modern audiences love his artwork.In conclusion, having a hobby plays a big role in the life of any person. That's That is important for development . Hobby is like your personal feature [ ...is a demonstration of your personality...I hesitate to put words in your mouth, but the conclusion needs work. ]
I think you have a nice short essay here; it just needs a little work before it's perfect. Keep writing every day! Best wishes.
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