My last work experience
This last summer I have been working in a fish and seafood industry. The main tasks I needed to do were doing quality control of the products that were going to be distributed to supermarkets. Every day I needed to check the temperature of the refrigerators, production areas and boilers where the seafood was going to be cooked, as well as checking the quality of the products. Everyday I had to do the same, so I was not starting my job feeling excited, quite opposite, I felt bored because I knew that my tasks were going to be repetitive. What I liked most is having some trouble that I needed to solve, since I was changing from being a checker machine into being a human person that uses his brain and knowledge in order to do the things better. Another thing that I enjoyed was talking with workers that were placed in the production area. I could exchange life experience, opinions and frustrations with other people, so I felt less lonely in my daily routine.
Nevertheless, the company where I was working was not paying workers for four months and people was really worried about their job, so they were complaining all the time, and this was affecting me on a personal level because I am too much empathic, so sometimes I was not having a good time while talking with them. Finally, they fired me after 1 month working there without receiving my salary. Even if it is a bad experience, I could learn a lot, which encourages me to find another job to keep learning and continue giving my best to solve troubles that needs to be solved.
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My Last Work Experience
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This last summer I have been working in the fish and seafood industry. The main tasks I needed to do were doing quality control of the products that were going to be distributed to supermarkets. Every day I needed to check the temperature of the refrigerators, production areas and boilers where the seafood was going to be cooked, as well as checking the quality of the products. Everyday I had to do the same things, so I was not starting my job feeling excited, quite opposite, I felt bored because I knew that my tasks were going to be repetitive. What I liked most is having some trouble that I needed to solve, since I was changing from being a checking machine into being a human person that uses his brain and knowledge in order to do the things better. Another thing that I enjoyed was talking with workers that were placed in the production area. I could exchange life experiences, opinions and frustrations with other people, so I felt less lonely in my daily routine.Nevertheless, the company where I was working was not paying workers for four months and people was really worried about their job, so they were complaining all the time, and this was affecting me on a personal level because I have too much empathy, so sometimes I was not having a good time while talking with them. Finally, they fired me after 1 month working there without receiving my salary. Even if it is a bad experience, I could learned a lot, which encourages me to find another job to keep learning and continue giving my best to solve troubles that needs to be solved.
For the last few days, I've been reading some very well written texts, not only on this platform, that really surprise me. Was it a few months ago, or maybe a few years, when the quality of written English was nothing like this? Congrats! You write clearly and well, with practically no errors. However, keep writing.
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My last work experience
Last summer I was working in the fish and seafood industry. Mainly I ensured quality control of the products on their way to the supermarket. Every day I needed to check the temperature of the fridges, production areas and ovens where the seafood was to be cooked, as well as to check product quality. Every day was the same, so I was not starting my job feeling excited. Quite the opposite, I felt bored because I knew that my tasks were repetitive. What I liked most was having a problem to solve, since I was changing from being a checking-machine into a human being using their* brain and knowledge in order to do things better. Another thing that I enjoyed was talking to workers in the production area. I could exchange life experiences, opinions and frustrations with others, so I felt less lonely in my daily routine.Nevertheless, the company where I worked was not paying workers for four months and people were really worried about their job, so they were complaining all the time, and this was affecting me on a personal level because I am much too much empathic\(empathetic?)/expressive?, so sometimes I was not having a good time talking with them. Finally, they fired me after 1 month without paying me a penny. Even if it was a bad experience, I did learn a lot, which encourages me to find another job to keep learning and to continue giving my best to solve troubles that need to be solved.
*or, her brain ..., you could say 'his' and it would be perfectly general, but in your case 'her' is better. 'their' is his/her indifferently (recommended).
Very well written!
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