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First time at the beach I went to the beach on friday, with my little niece.She loved the ocean waves.We was played , she fell in the water, she got up quicly and she said: Aunt, the water is salty.

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First time at the beach

I went to the beach on friday,  Friday with my little niece.She loved the ocean waves.We was played , she fell in the water, she got up quicly quickly and she said: Aunt, the water is salty.


Use periods instead of commas.  We played.  She fell in the water.  She got up quickly and she said,  " Aunt, the water is salty."


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First time at the beach

I went to the beach on Friday, with my little niece.She loved the ocean waves.We was played , she fell in the water, she got up quickly and she said: Aunt, the water is salty.

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