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Professional interview. Hi, I'm 25 years old and I'm italian. I have professional experiences as a office secretary as accountant, front office and personal assistant. Also I speak fluently spanish. (Also halp me to add something in this presentation! thank you)

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Professional interview.

"Hi, I'm 25 years old and I'm italian. I have professional experiences as a office secretary as accountant, front office and personal assistant. Also I speak fluently spanish."

Hi!  - informal, no no!!  Similarly "I'm".   "as a office" should be said and written "as an office".  Accountant looks horrible but is correct, I'm English but really hate the perverse spelling.  The proper name of the language that Spaniards speak is Spanish!  Similarly an italian man speaks Italian and comes from Italy.

(Also halp me to add something in this presentation!
thank you)   halp -> help


A 25 year old italian, having extensive professional experience in office work and business administration; particular duties included book keeping and maintaining accounts*, front office reception & hospitality with clients and also as a personal assistant to a senior manager (even better if you can say that in the plural).

In addition, I speak fluent Spanish and some English, in addition to Italian.   [ Do you drive, have you formal qualifications .. what fields have you practical experience of? ]

*accountants have formal professional qualification like a degree, don't claim a formal profession unless you have the certificates to back it up 

PS. I know this is ugly English not flowing prose of an essay, but this is realistic biz speak

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You may want to try using a list. It is more formal. For example: Write an short introduction. Here is where you can talk about details like front office and personal assistant. Experience: Executive Assistant (formal for secretary) Accountant (If you can be more detailed that might help) Additional Skills: Spanish (fluent) The person reading this needs to be able to find things quickly. Paragraphs can make that hard. I hope this helps. Blessings!
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Professional interview.

Hi, I'm 25 years old and I'm Italian. I have professional experiences as an office secretary, as an accountant, in the front office and as an personal assistant. I also speak Spanish fluently.




(Also help me to add something to this presentation!
Thank you)

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