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My diary - I forgot to comb my hair this morning ! This morning, I woke up at 08:30am as usual. But I didn't want to get up, so I glued myself to bed for another 10 minutes. Oh, it was so warm inside the bed.

After getting up, I was in a hurry. I finished washing face and dressing up quickly. Then went out of my apartment.

My office is just 2 kilometers away from my apartment, I often go to work by bus or by walk.

When I was on the bus, I realized that I forgot comb my hair. Oh my god. Fortunately my hair is short, it was not very messy and I had a comb in my bag.

When I arrived my office, I ran to lady's room, combed my hair.

I thought it was so funny. Ahaha

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My diary - I forgot to comb my hair this morning !

This morning, I woke up at 08:30am as usual. But I didn't want to get up, so I glued myself to bed for another 10 minutes. Oh, it was so warm inside the bed.

After getting up, I was in a hurry. I finished washing my face and dressed up quickly. Then I went out of my apartment ["Then I left my apartment" is better].

My office is just 2 kilometers away from my apartment, so I often walk or go to work by bus or by walk.

When I was on the bus, I realized that I forgot to comb my hair. Oh my god. Fortunately my hair is short, so it was not very messy and I had a comb in my bag [OK, but "Fortunately my hair is short, so it was not very messy. Also, I had a comb in my bag" sounds better].

When I arrived at my office, I ran to the ladies' room and combed my hair.

I thought it was so funny. Ahaha

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My diary - I forgot to comb my hair this morning !

This morning I woke up at 08:30 am. as usual, but I didn't want to get up, so I glued myself to bed for another 10 minutes. Oh, it was so warm inside the bed!*

After getting up I was in a hurry. I finished washing my face and dressed up quickly. Then I left my apartment.

My office is just 2 kilometers away from my apartment, I often go to work by bus or walk.

When I was on the bus, I realized that I forgot to comb my hair. Oh my god!* Fortunately my hair is short, and not very messy and I had a comb in my bag.

When I arrived at my office I ran to the lady's room and combed my hair.

I thought it was so funny. Ahaha!

*"Oh, ...!" is the correct form.

Very well written!

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