PLEASE correct me. I wrote it myself 2 hours spent
Hi gyes!
Today the birthday my sister. She is 18 ears old. And I want to organise a surprise party. The theme of the party wos costume. You search a costume and take alcohole drinks and snacks. It's starts at 9 o'clock in backer street 13. You can get there on bus 43 or 180. the you stop near 24-market and goes left and saw home with lightning (гирлянды).
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PLEASE correct me. I wrote it myself 2 hours spent
Hi guys!Today is the birthday of my sister. She is 18 years old, and I want to organize a surprise party. The theme of the party is a costume party. You buy a costume and bring alcoholic drinks and snacks. It's starts at 9 o'clock at 13 Backer street . You can get there on bus 43 or 180. You get off bus at the stop near the 24-market and goes left until you see the home with lightning (гирлянды).
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gyes - should be "guys"
ears - should be "years"
The theme of the party wos costume. - should be "It is going to be a fancy dress party."
"It's starts" is incorrect. You should say "It starts"
"the you stop near 24-market" - You should say "Then you get off the bus at the shop called "market 24""
As for your last sentence you should write "... see a house with strings of christmas lights"
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