Is fast food popular in my country?
Today I have been asked if fast food is so popular in my country as it seems to be in USA and whether it could cause health problems or any kinds of bad consequences. My answer was the one that follows:
From my point of view, junk food is still a problem in USA, additionally, it is becoming a point which needs to be treated urgently here in Spain. Many people, particularly, the younger unnecesarily attend to mass-produced food restaurants at least two times a week. This is something that increases if we take a look at families who, instead of cooking healthy and homemade products, they pick up their children at school and take them to these kind of places as some reward for studying. In fact, this habit is causing many problems of obesity and diabetes which most frequently started to appear in teenagers and adolescents. Another interesing issue related to this matter is the inclusion of the so-called palm oil in almost every piece of food, which is an outright aggressive sustance. Therefore, we have to become aware of the bad consequences of these products in our digestive system so as to decrease the drawbacks they are displaying in our society.
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Is fast food popular in my country?
Today I have been was asked if fast food is so as popular in my country as it seems to be in the USA and whether it could cause health problems or any kinds of bad consequences. My answer was the one that follows:From my point of view, junk food is still a problem in the USA, additionally, it is becoming a point problem which needs to be treated urgently here in Spain. Many people, particularly, the younger unnecessarily attend to "eat at" or "visit" mass-produced food restaurants at least two times a week. This is something that increases if we take a look at families who, instead of cooking healthy and homemade products, they pick up their children at school and take them to these kind of places as some reward for studying. In fact, this habit is causing many problems of obesity and diabetes which most frequently started to appear in teenagers and adolescents. Another interesting issue related to this matter is the inclusion of the so-called palm oil in almost every piece of food, which is an outright aggressive substance. Therefore, we have to become aware of the bad consequences of these products in our digestive system so as to decrease the drawbacks they are displaying in our society.
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Is fast food popular in my country?
Today I was asked if fast food is as popular in my country as it seems to be in the USA and whether that could cause health problems or other harm. My answer follows:From my point of view, junk food is still a problem in the USA, additionally, it is becoming a point which needs to be treated urgently here in Spain. Many people, particularly younger people, unnecesarily eat at fast food restaurants at least twice a week. This number increases if we look at those families who, instead of cooking healthy and homemade products, pick their children up from school and take them to these eateries as a reward for studying. In fact, this habit is causing many problems of obesity and diabetes which most frequently start to appear in teenagers and adolescents. Another interesting issue related to this matter is the inclusion of so-called "palm oil" in almost every piece of food, which is an outright aggressive substance. Therefore, we have to become aware of the harm done by these products to our digestive system so as to decrease the harm they cause.
Very well written!
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