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A scary salvation
Once day, I had to run among the undergrowth because an animal was hunting me, but the animal was like a shadow and formless.It was night, and I was walking on the path. The sound of the night was relaxing, the moon’s light lit my way, all was perfect, but then I heard a noise, a horrible noise, like the lament of woman.
I stood still, with all my body rigid and my blood rising to my head. As much as I could, I turned my head to see the origin of the noise, but I could only see a pair of red eyes out of a dark shape.
Shape? It was less a shape than a bubble of darkness
It was three meters from me for a second but suddenly it was gone.
Then I felt a cold thing in my right shoulder, so I stared to run, with all my forces.
The moon was not in the sky, the darkness closed my way, and I could only see one meter before me.
A rock made me fall to the floor. I watched my blood on my hands as if it had its own light.
As far I could, I got up and the mood caught me again, and the countryside was without rocks.
When I come back to the path, the police were there with a man in the police car. He was a killer, and if I had been there, he would have killed me, he was waiting for his next victim.
The thing saved my life.
Very well written!
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