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I would be grateful for your corrections) You always want to repeat something that made you happy in the past. Sometimes you want it so badly that can even forget about the pain, frustration, misunderstanding - the implications of this happiness. Already start to think "no, this time everything will be perfect. as a movie, or as in the songs, listening to which I remember how we first met. You won`t anneal my heart again." After such words people experiencing pain. Pain, surpassing previous. Because it is offensively. Because you are sorry. Because call yourself a fool and wonder how could you make this mistake. Twice. The problem is that you do not understand. Hoping for. And want to experience it all over again. Because only this can make you happy. Because only He can make you happy.

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I would be grateful for your corrections.

You always want to repeat something that has made you happy in the past. Sometimes you want it so badly that you can even forget about the pain, frustration, and misunderstandings. - the implications of this happiness.
Already start to At first you think, "No, this time everything will be as perfect as the movies or as in the songs listening to which I remember which remind you of how we you first met. You won`t anneal my have your heart broken again."
After But such words people experiencing only exacerbate your pain. Pain, surpassing previous. Because it is offensively hurts. Because you are sorry. Because you call yourself a fool and wonder how could you make this mistake twice.
The problem is that you do not understand. You are hoping for something better, and want to experience it your previous happiness all over again.
Because only this can make you happy.
Because only He can make you happy.

I'm not sure if I'm doing your original thoughts justice, and, as with most things written in English, there are many ways to say many of the thoughts you've expressed here. These corrections are the best I can do with my limited knowledge of Russian grammar and my Russian-English dictionary, but I tried to preserve your original post as well as I could. I hope I did well. :)

The only general advice I have is to remember to keep your pronouns consistent. If you start with "you/your", make sure you continue to use "you/your".  However, I know many native English speakers who have difficulty with this in everyday conversation. You've actually done very well here. :)

And, on a more personal note, I think we've all been there. I hope this works out for you.

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I think it is very good, there are only a few small mistakes. I am not sure I am doing it credit with the corrections but here goes.

You always want to repeat the things that made you happy in the past.Sometimes you want it so badly that can even forget about the pain, frustration, and misunderstandings those things cause. You think "no, this time everything will be perfect. Like a movie, or in songs. The songs which remind you of how we first met. You won`t break my heart again."

Such words causing people pain. Pain, surpassing previous pain. Because you are sorry. Because you call yourself a fool and wonder how could you make this mistake, twice.
The problem is, you hope for this pain. You want to experience it all over again.

Because only this can make you happy.
Because only He can make you happy.

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