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Could you please correct my writing Guideline Order Processing The customers request highest customer service and logistics level on delivery time, delivery reliability, delivery of complete order and order status information. The main aspects of order processing are: 1. Basic Information 2. According to agreement with customers the articles need to be produced and delivered in the following sequence 3. Please make sure that every pallet is correct stickered with A4 size paper with country name in capital letters 4. The transport company will contact you and pick up the goods according to the distribution of the customers 5. For pallets no edge protective strip needed.

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Could you please correct my writing

Hi Polly

I will try.

Guidelines for  Order Processing

Customers want the best customer service, the shortest delivery time, reliability, delivery of complete order and order status information. The main aspects of order processing are:

1. Basic Information
2. According to agreement with the customers, the articles need to be produced and delivered in the following sequence
3. Please make sure that every pallet is correctly marked with A4 sized paper, with the country name in capital letters
4. The transport company will contact you and pick up the goods for delivery to the customers
5. There are no edge protective strips needed for the pallets


I hope that this is helpful.

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Polly, the English is good but your meaning sometimes is not concise or clear. Perhaps this might sound a bit better. ORDER PROCESSING GUIDELINES Our customers require the highest service and ongoing updated information regarding order status, order completion, and delivery. Order processing requires: 1. Obtaining basic information from the customer 2. Producing the ordered articles 3. Delivery: a. Each pallet labeled with A4size paper showing the COUNTRY name in capital letters. b.The transport company will contact you regarding time of pick-up according to the customer's requirements. (Polly, is there a step missing here? How will the transport company know that there is a completed product? Who notifies them?) c. No protective edge is needed on pallets. ( I hope this is what you were looking for.[emoji][emoji])
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