A discount sale
今天我买了一个Steam Link和Steam礼物卡在Eb Games. 今天一起二十九澳大利亚元。Steam Link在Steam店八是九澳大利亚元。我要走EB Games店。这个店二十分钟远处走在我的工作。
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A discount sale
今天我买了一个Steam Link和Steam礼物卡在Eb Games. 今天一起二十九澳大利亚元。Steam Link在Steam店八是九澳大利亚元。我要走EB Games店。这个店二十分钟远处走在我的工作。advice：
1. change 一起 to 一共； PS :一起means" together" ；一共means" in total "
2.change 澳大利亚元 to 澳元 this is the way of Chinese say Australian Dollar .
3.change 这个店二十分钟远处走在我的工作 to 这个地方离我工作的地方步行大约二十分钟（It takes me 20 minutes to walk there ）
Overall , not bad , at least most Chinese can understand what you are going to express.
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Hi everyone, today I'm trying to use words I know immediately for writing a short story. This is what I wanted to say if I was writing English:
"Today I bought a Steam Link from EB Games. Today it cost $29 and I also got a steam gift card for $20. Normally a Steam Link costs $89.95. I had to pick up the product in store. The store is roughly 20 minutes walk from my work place."
The theory about using words you immediately know comes from this blog post: https://www.fluentin3months.com/beginner/
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