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January 18th, 2018 Lunch attitude "what your lunch says about you?"

This is the topic of the article I read today.

The main idea of this article is trying to tell that we are too busy to treat our meals well.

And that is true about me, I always have my meal while i am working. And the more things is if the phone rings while food just in my mouth, i will throw it out to answer the phone call.

Before works, I am a person who have a slow meal. Maybe I should move to France, I heard about the French always have a graceful, slow meal.

Anyway this is all about our attitude to work and food.

We should not have our lunch be a makeshift lunch.

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January 18th, 2018 Lunch attitude

"what your lunch says about you?"

This is the topic of the article I read today.

The main idea of this article is trying to tell that we are too busy to treat our meals well.

And that is true about me. I always have my meal while I am working. And what's worse the more things is if the phone rings while I have food just in my mouth, I will throw spit it out to answer the phone call.

Before working, I am was a person who liked to have a slow meal. Maybe I should move to France. I heard about that the French always have a graceful, slow meal.

Anyway this is all about our attitude toward work and food.

We should not have our lunch be a makeshift lunch.

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COMMENTS: Good essay! Only a few mistakes. First, always capitalize *I* when you use it as a first-person pronoun (我). When you have something in your mouth, you "spit" it out. For example, "I took a sip of coffee, but it was too hot to drink, so I spit it out." I hope this helps.

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