My car.
thanks in advance for your help.
Two years ago, I bought my car. It´s a Renault Megane and I´m very happy with it. What i like the most is its fantastic red color. It is not a normal red color.It is a color with a lot of reflexes and diferents shines.
It has 30.000 kms and it has not had any breakdown.
Every weeks I go to wash it. I like my car clean.
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My car.
thanks in advance for your help.Two years ago I bought my car (a comma isn't necessary in this sentence). It´s a Renault Megane and I´m very happy with it. What I like the most is its fantastic red color. It is not a normal red color. It is a color with a lot of reflexes (not sure what you mean by reflexes here) and different shines.
It has 30,000 kms and has yet to breakdown. (though not wrong grammatically, the second "it" was redundant).
Every week I wash it. ("go to" is unnecessary unless you are telling us where you go to wash your car). I like my car clean.
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