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It's my second time writing here in English. I am not using translator.
In the morning, after I woke up, I had a shower and went to the neighbor. Mrs Nena and I talked about kinda everything, but not important things.
So I helped her to make our lunch and we ate together. She was making fig candy when I arrived there.
After lunch I took my schoolbag and went to the university to finish a part of my homework.
Around 4pm I went to a meeting with my advisor and we tested some methods(don't understand this. Methods is a very broad term and really tells me nothing. You tested something for you research but what?) for my research. I was happy when all went well, but then an error occurred and it was hard to figure out until now.(What happened? did the error fly out a window.)
After the meeting, I went home, ate my dinner, washed the dishes and here I am.
Now I am gonna sleep.
As a reader I am confused by some of this. I like things simple and straight forward. I woke up, did this and then that and went to bed. Some terms confused me because it is unclear who you are? I know that you are at university because you told me but you are talking about research, methods and errors, are you a scientist, computer programmer or what? Also how did you fix the problem? don't need to be precise but was the problem a line of code, or something else.
It was good in the beginning and end but quite confusing in the middle. Certainly nothing that can't be fixed.
If you can correct my text, please, do it! It'll help me a lot! Since now, thank you!
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