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Lin Neko
The movie "Darkest Hour" On Thursdays I just neet to work in the morning shift, so I always go to see a movie by myself. It sounds weird to see a movie alone but I really enjoy.

Due to I really love those movies that based onthe true stories, Today I chose "Darkest Hour", it's about the World War II and the prime minister of United Kingdom -- Winston Churchill.

The story, just as everyone knows, the germen army invaded many Western countries and forced 300000 Frence and English soldiers to Dunkirk. At that time, some ministers wanted to negotiate with Germany via Italy. However, Churchill didn't want to negotiate with Hitler. He tried to have some speeches to all the citizens and encourage them to catch the final victory with all the cost.

It's a transcendent historical movie. Though there are so many similar movies about that event, but "Darkest Hour" haven't stultified me.

Most surprised me is the actor. I noticed the actor played Winston Churchill, his performance was extremely excellent. But I didn'tknow who he was during the movie. And in the end ofthe movie, when I saw the actors list, I couldn't believe my eyes, it's Gary Oldman, who acted as Sirius Black in Harry Potters. I can not believe even now. They're totally different men. But Gary Oldman performed just like he was the real Churchill. I think he really deserves a Oscars award.

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The movie "Darkest Hour"

On Thursdays I just neet only have to work in the morning shift, so I always go to see a movie by myself. IIt sounds weird (BETTER:  may sound wierd) to see a movie alone, but I really enjoy.

Due to I really love those movies that are based onthe true stories, Today I chose "Darkest Hour".   i It's about the World War II, and the Prime mMinister of the United Kingdom -- Winston Churchill.

The story, just aAs everyone knows, the germen German aArmy invaded many Western countries and forced 300,000 Frenceh and English soldiers to flee at Dunkirk. At that time, some ministers wanted to negotiate with Germany, via Italy. However, Churchill didn't want to negotiate with Hitler. He tried to havegive some speeches to all the citizens and encourage them to catchfight for the final victorywith all the at all cost.

It's a transcendent historical movie. TAlhough there are so many similar movies about that this event, but "Darkest Hour" haven't stultified didn't bore me.

Most surprised me is the actor. I noticed the actor who played Winston Churchill, his's performance was extremely excellent. But I didn't know who he was during the movie. And in the end of the movie, when I saw the actors list (BETTER:  movie credits or actor credits), I couldn't believe my eyes, it's Gary Oldman, who acted as Sirius Black in the Harry Potters movies. I can not believe it even now. They're totally different men. But Gary Oldman performed just like he was the real Churchill. I think he really deserves a Oscars award.

Nice work on a difficult subject.  I suggest you look for ways to simplify and shorten your sentences.  Also try reading more in English, to get a sense of the language.  That way, you will be able to resist the natural urge to translate directly from your own language.


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