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An invented story I'm learning some words and phrases (in capital letters), so please check if I have done a good job! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wanted to BREAK THROUGH in TV so I decided: I will be on a diet so I'll STEER CLEAR OF cakes, sweets, biscuits and I'll CUT junk food OUT. However, my mother wanted to DETER me because I was enough thin. When my Mum disagree with me, I become very upset so I CUT HER SHORT and I went to my room quickly. My window gave onto a beautiful wood, but day by day it was becoming more and more bare. Some WOODCUTTERS without judgment CUT all type of trees DOWN, but a long time ago something more dramatic happened and the wood disappeared PREMATURELY. TO CUT A LONG STORY SHORT, a big BLAZE destroyed the forest. Because of CUTBACKS imposed by the Government, some foolish people protested firstly CUTTING every things UP in the town, and then setting the wood on fire. TO CUT TO THE CHASE those people tried to ELUDE the police but were stopped. Now the forest is growing up slowly. I love those trees. When I'm sad, I open my window and it seems the trees talk to me and say:" Hey, don't worry, it's ok". There are a lot of mosquitos, that's true, but I use a spray that REPELS them. Recently, I have found a nice SHORTCUT to reach the school. It will be more easy going to school every day!

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An invented story

I'm learning some words and phrases (in capital letters), so please check if I have done a good job!
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I wanted to BREAK THROUGH in TV so I decided: I will be on go a diet so I'll STEER CLEAR OF cakes, sweets, biscuits and I'll CUT junk food OUT.

However, my mother wanted to DETER me because I was thin enough thin. When my Mum disagree with me, I become very upset so I CUT HER SHORT ('cut off' also works) and I went to my room quickly.

My window gave onto looks out into a beautiful woods, but day by day it was becoming more and more bare.
Some WOODCUTTERS without judgment were CUTTINg all type of the trees DOWN, but a long time ago something more dramatic happened and the woods disappeared PREMATURELY.

TO CUT A LONG STORY SHORT, a big BLAZE destroyed the forest.
Because of CUTBACKS imposed by the Government, some foolish people protested firstly by CUTTING every things UP in the town??(I don't understand the underlined part), and then setting the wood on fire.

TO CUT TO THE CHASE those people tried to ELUDE the police but were stopped. Now the forest is growing up slowly.

I love those trees. When I'm sad, I open my window and it seems the trees talk to me and say:" Hey, don't worry, it's ok". There are a lot of mosquitos, that's true, but I use a spray that REPELS them.
Recently, I have found a nice SHORTCUT to reach the school. It will be more easy easier to going to school every day!

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