2018!
I celebrated the New Year with my family and a good friend, she asked us over. We had stuffed dumplings, herring under the coat, red caviar and of course the salad "Olivier" on our table. We congratulated each other, said the best wishes and it was the champagne occasion. After the midnight we went outside. We swang on a swing, went down the slide like kids. It was fun.
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2018!
I celebrated the New Year with my family and a good friend, she asked us over who invited us over. We had stuffed dumplings, herring under the coat, red caviar and of course the salad "Olivier" on our table. We congratulated each other, said the best wishes and it was the champagne occasion. After the midnight we went outside. We swang rode on a swing and went down the slide like kids. It was fun._____
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2018!
I celebrated the New Year with my family and a good friend, she asked invited us over. We had stuffed dumplings, herring under the coat, red caviar and of course the salad "Olivier" on our table. We congratulated each other, said the best wishes and it was the champagne occasion. After the midnight we went outside. We swang swung on a swing, went down the slide like kids. It was fun.Good job Kapelka, it's a very good essay.
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Use this idiom to sound more natural. When drinking champagne you could say "it was time to break out the champagne" or "we broke ot the champagne."
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