Taking a rest
Yesterday was Saturday. I waked up in the morning and did the wash and cleaned rooms. After doing those affairs, I was sleeping on the couch before I knew it. I wanted to write a diary in English everyday on this site, but I couldn’t yesterday. I think I was tired. While I am tired, I can’t do what I want to do. I slept for a long time last night, I can write this diary. Taking a enough rest is very important.
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Taking a rest
Yesterday was Saturday. I woke up in the morning and did the washing and cleaning of the rooms. After doing those affairs, I was sleeping on the couch before I knew it. I wanted to write a diary in English everyday on this site, but I couldn’t yesterday. I think I was tired. While I am tired, I can’t do what I want to do. I slept for a long time last night, I can write this diary. getting enough rest is very important.0
Thank you! Actually, ”I woke up in the morning, washed and cleaned the rooms.” is easer to understand. "tasks" is more familiar than “affairs” for me.
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while the original correction I gave you is correct, I would personally phrase it like this, "I woke up in the morning, washed and cleaned the rooms. also the word "affairs" is also correct but you could also use the word "chores" or even "tasks".
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Yesterday was Saturday. I waked up in the morning and did the wash and cleaned rooms. After doing those affairs, I was sleeping on the couch before I knew it. I wanted to write a diary in English everyday on this site, but I couldn’t yesterday. I think I was tired. While I am tired, I can’t do what I want to do. I slept for a long time last night, I can write this diary. Taking a enough rest is very important.
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Yesterday was Saturday. I waked up in the morning and did the wash and cleaned rooms. After doing those affairs, I was sleeping on the couch before I knew it. I wanted to write a diary in English everyday on this site, but I couldn’t yesterday. I think I was tired. While I am tired, I can’t do what I want to do. I slept for a long time last night, I can write this diary. Taking a enough rest is very important.
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