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Reference letter needs correction. I knew Miss XX during the “Physiology and Proteomic” class that I carry out at the Master’s degree students of Plant and Microbial Biotechnology course. The candidate has always been interested and, thanks to her speech, she has immediately showed scientific curiosity. In the second year she asked me to help her with the master’s thesis, entitled “Osmotic and salt stress during Lupinus albus and Lupinus mutabilis germination”. During these months she has had to work together with more experienced colleagues from different nations, showing enthusiasm in the learning process and willingness for the teamwork, as well as organizations and self-employed skills. Complications throughout the lab work has been tackled with the right motivation, allowing her to reach the desired goal on fixed time. She has refined techniques as: plants grow cultivation and biometric analysis; free sugar determination; AAS; Proteins extraction and quantification; SDS-PAGE; statistics analysis. During the discussion of the thesis she demonstrated excellent communication and exposure skills with which she has got the vote of “110 cum laude”, the maximum allowed. In my opinion, she lives up to a PhD experience, which will carry on with passion and reliability from the candidate.

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Reference letter needs correction.

I know Miss XX during  from the “Physiology and Proteomic” class that I carry out at the Master’s degree students of Plant and Microbial Biotechnology course. (I'm not sure if you want me to correct your sentence structure as well, because the first sentence is the most important and you should try to make it more concise and less 'wordy') The candidate has always been interested, and thanks to her speech (do you mean a public speech she gave or the way she speaks in general?) she has immediately showed scientific curiosity. In the second year she asked me to help her with her master’s thesis, entitled “Osmotic and salt stress during Lupinus albus and Lupinus mutabilis germination”. During these months she has had to work together with more experienced colleagues from different nations, showing enthusiasm in the learning process and a willingness for the teamwork, as well as organizational and self-employed (are you trying to say 'skills that she has learned herself?') skills. Complications throughout the lab work has been were tackled with the right motivation, allowing her to reach the desired goal on fixed time ('on fixed time' doesn't sound right in this context. Consider using 'according to the time schedule', it sounds more natural).
She has refined the following techniques as:

plants grow cultivation and biometric analysis;

free sugar determination;

AAS;

Proteins extraction and quantification;

SDS-PAGE;

Statistics analysis.


During the discussion of the her thesis she demonstrated excellent communication and exposure skills with which rewarded her with a she has got the vote of “110 cum laude”, the maximum allowed.


In my opinion, she lives up to a PhD experience, which will carry on with passion and reliability from the candidate. (Consider re-writing this last sentence as 'In my opinion her passion for learning and her reliable attitude will allow her to live up the expectations of a PHD student'.)

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