Without Faith
I was seriously injured on my soul. I was tried to recognize someone or something. I was walking on the dirty streets when o lost my faith in myself.
So, suddenly, I saw your face. in the middle of this strong storm. This made me keep on my walked in this a huge pollution sea. Black angles appeared all time.
Everyday fake stars are slowly disappearing. I never had some explanation for this phenomenon. Many black mirrors are around us trying to break close us.
I could guess that this could be diseases of humanity is kind of lose faith. What it happen right now? The world is stranger, the virtual world is more common than we could image. The solution, maybe we could find only seeing the sea on the top of a hill and its waves slowly went away on a shining day.
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Without Faith
I had seriously injured my soul. I tried to recognize someone or something. I was walking on the dirty streets when I lost faith in myself.Suddenly*, I saw your face in the middle of this strong storm. This made/helped me/gave me the strength to continue walking/continue on my walk in this a huge polluted sea. Black angles appear all time.
Everyday fake stars are slowly disappearing. I never had an explanation for this phenomenon. Many black mirrors are around us trying to break close to us/ trying to break us.
I guess that this could be a disease of humanity; to lose faith. What if it happens right now? The world is strange, the virtual world is more common than we can imagine. The solution? Maybe we could find it only by seeing the sea from the top of a hill with its waves slowly vanishing on a shiny day.
* "so suddenly" would put emphasis on the abrupt nature of the event. "so, suddenly" usually happens when we're using filler words to speak. in the context of a written piece like this, it takes away the urgent feel and makes it more informal and more slang.
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