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I and My native speaker friends were started to discussion regarding to go a joyful long way winter tour, once our discussion completed the location has been finalised,
the following scheduled are the trip will start on Saturday night around 9:45pm from our home to the city of Melur, after arrived the city we will go together to see a Tamil movie in the Ganesh Theatre, the movie will begin on 10:30pm and it will take around 2 and a half hours to the end of movie, afterwards we will go to the city of Madurai and cross the river bridge and following the road signs to reach our destination, in-between mid of way we will take a small break for to have a tea, after refresh the travel will continued, our travelling scheduled almost full night so none of us will not allowed to get sleep, the script will continue..
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This story is true. Please correct my sentences.
Me and my native* friends began a discussion regarding going on a joyful, long way winter tour, and once we finished talking the location was finalized.The following is the schedule: the trip will start on Saturday night around 9:45 pm from our home to the city of Melur. After arriving at the city we will go together to see a Tamil movie in the Ganesh Theatre. The movie will begin at 10:30 pm and it will take around 2 and a half hours to the end of movie, afterwards we will go to the city of Madurai and cross the river bridge and following the road signs to reach our destination. Before the mid-point we will take a small break for to have a tea. After refreshing ourselves, we will continue traveling. Our travelling is scheduled for almost the full night so none of us will be able to get sleep. To be continued...
NOTE: *"Native" in English can mean "aboriginal", or the people who have inhabited a region from the beginning. I think you might mean "native speaker friends" here. If so, please include "speaker" to specify what you're talking about.
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