Identify an issue in your community that concerns you. How would you like to address this issue?
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Essay : Identify an issue in your community that concerns you. How would you like to address this issue?
I was always asking myself: Can any person be a smart person? a leader for his community? a successful person? Even that he comes from a none rich intellectual family? Even that he comes to the world in a normal kind of Moroccan family? I mean by this: A family were the parents beat there child's and don't encourage them.Tell the time I knew that people can do it because it was already done.People with hard problems could reach what they wanted in life.
These questions motivated me to work hard in solving community problems and that's why I passed the last 4 years of college participating in a lot of extracurricular activities, and learning from people smarter than me , leading projects , participating in seminars and trying to know where I can succeed , and learning how can I trust myself .
What I learned from my work is that it can be done only by giving the youth power to speak and act, and to reach this I had an idea of a project.
My idea of the project is creating an Open space where student and people interested in developing their soft skills and learning from smarter people. Everyone can join us to discuss topics like business, religion, politics or problems in their society while having a drink.
What I want from this project is to motivate people to talk and speak for themselves, we should educate people that they have the right to speak and at the same time we will exchange our ideas and information between each other.
A person can be smart and have the tools to be successful but he need sometimes just the idea or the information so that he can discover something interesting in himself.
In this open space, we can talk also about the exchange programs, about the new startups, the social entrepreneurship, and different things.
The Internet is a really a powerful tool is well used, that's why I will market the idea using friends and social media and after when I have lot of people interested in this project I will loan an open space where I can offer drinks for people and organize my activities and workshops
Then each time I will call some professionals in the field of business and leadership and business to teach the interested persons how to be a leader besides other topics.
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Identify an issue in your community that concerns you. How would you like to address this issue?
Please help me with ideas and correct my essay :Essay : Identify an issue in your community that concerns you. How would you like to address this issue?
I always ask myself: Can any person be a smart person? A leader for his community? A successful person? Even if he doesn't come from a rich intellectual family? Even if he comes into the world in a normal Moroccan family? What I mean by this is if he is born into a family where the parents beat their children and don't encourage them. ((((Tell the time I knew that people can do it because it was already done.People with hard problems could reach what they wanted in life.))) I'm not sure what you mean by this I would edit your thoughts or take it out)
These questions have motivated me to work hard in solving community problems, which is why in the last 4 years of college I have: participated in a lot of extracurricular activities, learned from people smarter than me , lead projects , participated in seminars, tried to understand where I can improve , and learned how can I trust myself .
What I learned from my work is that it can be done only by giving the youth power to speak and act, which is how I came to my idea for a project.
My project idea is to create an open space where students and people interested in developing their soft skills and learning can benefit from smarter people. Everyone can join us in discussing topics like business, religion, politics or problems in their society while in a relaxed environment.
What I want from this project is to motivate people to talk and speak for themselves, by educating people that they have the right to speak and at the same time exchanging our ideas and information between each other.
A person can be smart and have the tools to be successful but he sometimes just needs an idea or the information so that he can discover something interesting in himself.
In this open space, we can talk also about the exchange programs, about the new startups, the social entrepreneurship, and different things.
The Internet is a really a powerful tool which can be well used, that's why I will market the idea using friends and social media and after when I have lot of people interested in this project, I will loan an open space where I can offer drinks for people and organize my activities and workshops
Then each time I will call some professionals in the field of business and leadership and business to teach the interested persons how to be a leader besides other topics.
good job. I couldn't highlight some of my edits so just got back and read it through. Love your idea too!
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