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Introducing Myself
I think I have forgotten to introduce myself. I read many people’s information and entries on italki and . I found that everyone’s first entry is an introduction of themselves, but mine are all about my daily life.
You know, writing a graduation thesis is so annoying. I even had a dream when I was sleeping that I was busy with my paper. So please forgive me that I didn’t give you my introduction, for I am woolly-headed because of the thesis. I hope it is not too late to say something about myself now.
Hello everyone! I am Sophy. I will graduate from University (if I can pass the final exam). My major is English and Business, so English is very important to me and I really want to improve it. I live in Guangzhou, China. This city is beautiful and modern. And if you come to Guangzhou, you can taste many delicious foods.
I like to read all kinds of books so much. As For me, books are food for the mind. Pride and Prejudice and Jane Eyre are my favorite books. From these two books, I learned that the most important things to a woman are love and dignity. And this cognition These realizations are very beneficial to my life.
In addition, watching movies, listening music, travelling and drawing are my hobbies. Oh, yes, I also like singing. It's would be my pleasure to sing for you, if you can put up with my terrible voice.
Finally, I hope we can enjoy our time on italki.
Best wishes for all of you!
No major problems! All the corrections that I made are just to make you sound more like a native :) Don't forget that in English you can't start sentences with conjunctions.
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