Help me to refine my study plan plz I want to study ILAC of Toronto in Canada, so I must submit the study plan. Please help me to refine it. Thank you very much. The following is my study plan: When I was in the graduate school, my classmates and I had an opportunity to participate in a venture competition in Thailand on behalf of our school. It was one of the most precious experiences in my life. Every time when I think about it, I always feel a pity that my English was not good enough. If only I had spoken English fluently, I could learn more from that opportunity. Since then, I make up my mind to learn English continuously. Majoring in Business Administration, I’m interested in marketing, especially in product marketing. Lack of self-confidence in English makes me away from my ideal job. After graduation, I’ve worked in a local manufacturing company to date. During these four years, I’ve learned a lot from this job, such as the ability to solve problems and communication skill. In the meanwhile, I find that I’ve gotten used to this comfort zone and cannot feel any challenge and fulfillment from my job. I think it’s time to step out of it and make some changes. At that time, one of my friends just returned Taiwan from England. Her experience in England motivated me. The idea of studying abroad hit my mind of a sudden. I realize that studying abroad is the best way to overcome my fear to speak English and build my confidence in English. After consideration of feasibility and financial status, I decide to study abroad for six months by my saving. Finally, I choose Toronto due to its diverse composition of the population. International Language Academy of Canada (ILAC) is my top choice by reason of its classification system. It’s the most important decision in my life. When I go back to Taiwan, I hope I can speak English fluently and find my ideal job in a foreign company. I will do my best.