I why like program. at the first time, I hoped game designer. but, life is like to nothing in my hand. when I been the first grade of college, I challenged make a game with my friends. but we so young

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I why like program. at the first time, I hoped game designer. but, life is like to nothing in my hand. when I been the first grade of college, I challenged make a game with my friends. but we so young. we don't know all of thing. though, we had to challenged. and we could have not time. so I have been designer to programmer. we choice the unity engine at toolbox. we helped to the unity engine. It's very useful and amazing! though, we very hard because of i didn't know programming. I depend on the untiy engine. and our artists are not useful... I end up did not sleep for three days, but I maked 3D running mobile game! that's very amazing and exciteing! I can make to game that I want things. and I decide to be programmer.

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At first, I hoped to become a game designer.

but, life is like to nothing in my hand (뭐라고해요?).

When I was a first year (freshman) in college, I was challenged to make a game with my friends.

But being so young, we didn't know a lot about programming.

Though we took the challenge. and we could have not time (뭐?)

so I have been designer to programmer.

Maybe: "so i switched from game designer to software engineer"?

we chose to use Unity for our game (good)

we helped to use the unity engine (뭐?)

It's very useful and amazing!

though, we very hard because of i didn't know programming.

Although it was hard because i didnt know programming at the time.

I depend on used the untiy engine.

and our artists are not useful...(뭐?)

I end up did not sleep for three days, but I makedmade a working 3D mobile game!

that'sIt was very amazing and exciting! That I can make a game that I want. and so I decided to become a programmer.

Notes: not bad. I was confused about what your intention were in some places where i inserted 뭐.

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