Beach Voleyball
At this time I am in vocation of my university and unlike most part of the people I am not travelling. Then I have decided to make a series of notebook registers about things I do in my days in order to improve my English writing.
Today I called my friends to play Beach Voleyball in the main park of my city. Voleyball is a very popular sport in my country, probably because we have a really good national team, the best in world. The park is very far from my home, then a friend of mine came to my home and took me with his car. The traffic wasn't good but we got there in time. The park is really beautiful, it's very big, located in the east part of my city, edging the Poty River.The name of the park has been set on behalf of the river, Potycabana Park.
There are three beach voleyball courts in there and there is the place where people can get together to have fun and meet his friends to play. I really like my friends, they are really good people, I feel good and confortable when I am with them and that's wonderful. We played for two hours and my team won most part of the matches we played. Then when it was finished we walked in the park and snacked a traditional icecream of my state called Dindin.
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Beach Voleyball
At this time I am studying at in vocation of my university and unlike most part of the people I am not traveling. Then I have decided to make a series of notebook entries registers about things I do during in my days in order to improve my English writing.Today I called my friends to play Beach Volleyball in the main park of my city. Volleyball is a very popular sport in my country, probably because we have a really good national team, the best in the world. The park is very far from my home, so then a friend of mine came to my home and took me in with his car. The traffic wasn't good but we got there in time. The park is really beautiful, it's very big, located in the eastern part of my city, along edging the Poty River.The name of the park comes from has been set on behalf of the river, Potycabana Park.
There are three beach volleyball courts in there and there is also a the place where people can get together to have fun and meet his friends to play. I really like my friends, they are really good people. I feel good and comfortable when I am with them and that's wonderful. We played for two hours and my team won most part of the matches we played. Then when it was finished we walked in the park and snacked on a traditional ice cream of my state called Dindin.
Well done. I hope this helps. Also, I think volleyball is spelled differently in Portuguese. :-)
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