Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese

Nowadays,with the development of our country's economy and the trend of global cooperation,studying Chinese becomes more and more popular. (第一句有點怪怪的，我改不太出來QQ)

Many foreigners devote devoted to study Chinese now.However,some many Chinese students don't give priority to study Chinese recently.
Why does this phenomenon emerge?這句也怪怪的= =|(不好意思我程度不夠看不出怪在哪裡...)

From my perspective aspect,there are two major reasons.For one,students think that we started to learn Chinese when we was young babies,so they hold that it's easy to study Chinese and we don't have to put much energy on it.

"These students thought they learned Chinese since they were born. That makes them easy in handling Chinese. So they don't have to put much energy on it."

For another,teachers and parents always tell students that it is of great significance to study another language,like English.

"Plus, teachers and parents told them learning another language is very important."

Thus many students put Chinese aside.
In order to change this condition,I advocate that we students should switch our attitude towards studying Chinese.We must be sincere and modest in study.There is no end to learning,after all..Moreover,teachers and parents are bound to put emphasis on the importance of studying Chinese.
With our efforts,I believe that we are able to overcome this problem at last.

To eliminate this phenomenon, I think all of the students should change the attitude towards studying Chinese. We must be possitive towards it! And even teachers and parents shall tell all of the students the importance of studying Chinese. Learning will never ends. I believe that our hard working will paid off and conquered this situation eventually.

不好意思改得有點多...有錯也請指出來...

謝謝指教阿^^

Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese

Nowadays, with the development of our country's economy and the trend of global cooperation, the studying of Chinese has becomes more and more popular. However, some Chinese students don't give priority to study Chinese recently recently don't make studying their native language a priority.

Why does this phenomenon emerge occur? (I think phenomenon was used out of context & is unnecessary)From my perspective, there are two major reasons. For one, students think that since we have been learning Chinese from birth, started to learn Chinese when we was young babies,so they hold that it's easy to study Chinese and we don't have to put much energy on it without putting much effort into it.For another Also, teachers and parents always tell students that it is of great significance to study another language, like such as English.Thus, many students put Chinese aside.

In order to change solve this condition problem, I advocate that we students should switch change our attitude towards studying Chinese. We must be sincere diligent and modest in study. (I feel like modest and sincere were used out of context). There is no end to learning, after all. Moreover, teachers and parents are bound to put emphasis on the importance of studying Chinese.
With our efforts, I believe that we are will be able to overcome this problem at last.

All in all, I thought this was pretty good! Nice job!