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hello Hello. I'm André Luiz. I'm 37 years old. I'm from Brazil. I have 2 kids. One son who is 14 years old and a daughter who is 4 years old. I'm married to Camilla. I'm learning English. my English is very poor. I'm finding a new friends. thanks a lot for help me with my vocabulary and grammar.

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Hello. i'm André Luiz. I'm 37 years old. I'm from Brazil. I have 2 kids. One son who is 14 years old and a daughter who is 4 years old. I'm married to Camilla. I'm learning English. My English is very bad. I'm finding new friends.

thanks a lot for help me with my vocabulary and grammar.


Hi there! I'm Jyadon. I just have a few comments. You need to capitalize the beginning of sentences which you do do sometimes. "I've" is okay in a sentence like, "I've got to go," or "I've never done that." I've does mean I have but it's more correct to say, "I have two kids" instead of "I've two kids."    With means to be accompanied by, so you can't say I have a son with 14 years-old. It just doesn't make sense. It makes more sense to say, "One son who is 14 years-old." Same when saying the age of your daughter. 

It is also okay to say, "I am married with Camilla," but it sounds more natural to say, "I am married to Camilla."

And for your last sentence the correct way is, "I'm finding new friends." You are in the act of finding, which is why that "ing" is important.

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hello

hello. i'm André Luiz. I'm 37 years old. I'm from Brazil. I have 2 kids: One son who is 14 years old and a daughter who is 4 years old. I'm married to Camilla. I'm learning English. my English is very poor. I'm finding new friends.

thanks a lot for help me with my vocabulary and grammar.

In American English we don't use the contraction I've when we talk about having kids. 

Good luck with your English and finding friends!

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