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Description for my resume “ If you are lucky enough to find something you love doing, you are naturally going to do a better job with and give more of yourself to. In this way, your job is something you look forward to not simply a responsibility,” says Laura Brounstein, the director for Cosmopolitan magazine. Based on this saying I am lucky enough for both my field of study and my career, Having a great desire for my job, developing compelling, reliable and robust applications for wide range of customers. In my point of view ‘ programming’ is kind of creation and It’s an undefinable feeling when I’m a creator of an idea or an app, something which can permanently remain while I can not!

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Description for my resume

“If you are lucky enough to find something you love doing, you are naturally going to do a better job with it and give more of yourself to it. In this way, your job is something you look forward to, not simply a responsibility,” says Laura Brounstein, the director (editor?) of Cosmopolitan magazine.
Based on this saying, I am lucky enough in both my field of study and my career. I have great enthusiasm for my job, developing compelling, reliable and robust applications for a wide range of customers.
In my point of view, ‘programming’ is a kind of creation, and It’s an indefinable feeling when I’m the creator of an idea or an app, something which can permanently remain while I cannot!


-Don't leave a space after the first quotation mark.

-'Desire' is for a job you want to get, not one you already have. I think 'enthusiasm' is closer to what you meant.

-'Cannot' is written as a single word.


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Description for my resume

“ If you are lucky enough to find something you love doing, you are naturally going to do a better job with it and give more of yourself to it. In this way, your job is something you look forward to, not simply a responsibility,” says Laura Brounstein, the director for of Cosmopolitan magazine. 
Based on this saying,  I am lucky enough for in both my field of study and my career. Having a great desirepassionfor my job, I enjoy developing compelling, reliable and robust applications for a wide range of customers.
In my point of view, ‘ programming’ is a kind of creation, and it’s an undefinable indefinable feeling when I’m a the creator of an idea or an app, something which can permanently remain while I, (unfortunately), can notcannot!


Hope this helps! :)

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