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Shop renovation Which one is better?

Shop renovating: shipment pending until chrismas.

Shop renovation: estimated shipment date: chrismas.

因為店面改裝中,暫停出貨,直到聖誕節恢復正常出貨

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Shop renovation

Which one is better?

Shop renovating: shipment pending until chrismas.

Shop renovation: estimated shipment date: *Chrismas.

因為店面改裝中,暫停出貨,直到聖誕節恢復正常出貨

 

 **I think renovation is better as we are discussing the renovation as a singular event; also, remember to capitalise "Christmas", as all festivals and holidays in English normally use an initial capital letter.**

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