First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,this is Angel, from Shenzhen.I always enjoy learning languages. I like making friends. I have some friends from foreign countries as my colleages, and I tried to learn from them. They are friendly.But due to work is work, we do not have enough time to talk freely. I am a hard-working girl and I have passed oral English of PETS4, and I am sincere*. You speak in English fluently, and I speak in good Chinese, thus we can learn with each other. It would be really nice...

*Are you "sincere?" that you have passed oral PETS4 English or sincere about something else?

Paragraph might need a little revamp to make the context looks more formal and clear. =)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, this is Angel, from Shenzhen. I always enjoy learning a language. I like making friends. I have some friends from foreign countries as my colleages. I try to learn from them. They are friendly. But due to work being work, we have not enough time to talk freely. I am a hard-working girl and I have past oral English of PETS4, and I am sincere (about wanting to learn English). If you speak in English fluently, and I speak good Chinese, then we can learn from each other. It would be so nice...

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