Things to do before you die I hope to see my sons in a good situation. I mean, I want to to see them happy, healthy, that they aren´t alone, that they are nice people and that they have the job of the

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Things to do before you die I hope to see my sons in a good situation. I mean, I want to to see them happy, healthy, that they aren´t alone, that they are nice people and that they have the job of their dreams. Hopefully, I will see how they start their own families and maybe I will be able to help them in a way or another. But now, thinking about me and in a shorter deadline, I hope that I can cook by five years time, because right this moment I am a completely mess at the kitchen. Health permitting, I will be doing many sports when my children grow up. And I strongly believe that I will have tried a lot of different types of dances in 20 years time. For the ending, but not less important, I wish I could speak English fluently by the time of 10 years so that I can travel abroad.

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Things to do before you die.

I hope to see my sons in a good situation. I mean, I want to to see them happy, healthy, that they are not alone, that they are nice people and that they have the job of their dreams.

Hopefully, I will see how they them start their own families and maybe I will be able to help them in a way or another.

But now, thinking about me and in the short term/ near future. I hope that I will be a better cook in five years time, because right now I am a complete mess at the kitchen.

Health permitting, I will still be doing many sports when my children grow up. And I strongly believe that I will have tried a lot of different types of dances in 20 years time.

For the ending, Finally,/ In conclusion but no less important, I wish I will be able to speak English fluently by the time of within 10 years so that I can travel abroad.

Never begin a sentence with 'And', it is a connecting word within a sentence.

A nicely written text. I am sure that you will be speaking fluent English easily before 10 years.

Well done.

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