请帮助我检查一些句子

1. I have the exact type of sausage you are after.
你要的香肠种类我恰好有。
2. I need to go to Shanghai to visit my parents, I haven’t seen then for two years. Fortunately, I was sent to Shanghai on business.
       我需要去上海探望我父母，我两年没看过他们。幸而，我被寄出差上海了。

 我需要去上海探望我父母，我两年没看过他们。幸而，我被安排去上海出差了。

3. I can’t leave my child (I can’t bear to leave my child).
我舍不得离开我的孩子。

4. It is a pity to waste all these time standing in a queue.
舍不得浪费时间排队。

排队是在浪费时间。

5. It is best to visit Beijing in autumn. Beijing is beautiful in autumn.
北京是最好在秋天参观的。秋天的北京很美。

最好在秋天的时候参观北京。秋天的北京很美。

6. I know very little about Russian culture.
关于俄罗斯的文化，我的知识很差。

关于俄罗斯的文化，我知道的很少。

 

7. You speak French very well, you deserve a praise.
你说法语说的很流利，你值得夸奖。

 你说法语说得很流利，你值得被夸奖。

 

 

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请帮助我检查一些句子

1. I have the exact type of sausage you are after.
你要的那种香肠，我恰好有。
2. I need to go to Shanghai to visit my parents, I haven’t seen then for two years. Fortunately, I was sent to Shanghai on business.
我要去上海看我爸妈，我两年没看到他们了。幸好，我被派去到上海出差了。
3. I can’t leave my child (I can’t bear to leave my child).
我舍不得离开我孩子。
4. It is a pity to waste all these time standing in a queue.
把这些时间浪费在排队上面，太蛋疼了。【Please note this: "蛋疼"is an idiom in Chinese language, and it means "pity or annoying in a silent way"】
5. It is best to visit Beijing in autumn. Beijing is beautiful in autumn.
最好在秋天参观北京哦，北京的秋天可美了！。
6. I know very little about Russian culture.
我对俄罗斯文化了解很少。
7. You speak French very well, you deserve a praise.
你法语说的真流利，值得夸奖！

My revision is informal, it is used in daily Chinese frequently, but not suitable to use in formal writing.