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An essay about additional courses in secondary school
Dear All,Could you please share your opinion on an essay which I wrote in the scope of my preparation for the upcoming CAE Exam? It will take place in two weeks, so I would really appreciate any feedback. Thank you!
The topic: "What courses should be included in secondary schools' curricula"? I chose to discuss two options: "Ancient Greek and Latin" and "computer course".
While discussing additional disciplines which might be considered to be included in secondary schools' curricula, people usually stick to two different approaches. Some of them claim that being well-educated is second to none in terms of importance, whereas others contradict that practical skills are more prominent. For instance, what is more important: deep knowledge of Ancient Greek and Latin or honing computer skills?
When it comes to what additional discipline might be considered to be included in secondary schools' curriculum, people usually have two different views. Some would claim that being well-educated is second to none while others insist on the importance of having ( developping ) practical skills . For instance, what is the most important : the deep knowledge of Ancient Greek and Latin or honing computer skills?
First of all, it goes without saying that it is vital for everyone to be able to hold a conversation on different topics. Taking into account that in many aspects of modern culture derives from Ancient History, we can conclude it can be concluded that some additional and indepth knowledge on this topic would not be excessive for anyone ( would not go amiss for everyone ). On the other hand, it is also appears obvious that it cannot help pupils to move up the career ladder unless they are competent workers.
Now I suggest putting computer skills into perspective. Why is it hard to exaggerate the its importance of it? The answer is very simple: today you can hardly find a job which does not involve the use of using a computer. Not only has it become the main working tool instrument, but also it is the most convenient way of obtaining new information, knowledge and, therefore, skills. Even domestic chores have become much easier nowadays. On the Internet, we can always can find a new recipe or watch a tutorial on Youtube on how to hammer a nail on Youtube.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that under no circumstances do I want to diminish the importance of Ancient Greek and Latin. However, I am confident that being handy with a computer is indispensable for modern people.
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