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...A sweet lie or a bitter truth?
[ continued ]But what if we would/could just tell the truth, no matter how bitter (it was/is). What is was the worst that might/could happen? A few minutes, hours, or days of them being mad at us, or maybe more, but at least, we had would not to have drowned (ourselves) into the bog of lies. Forgiveness. A phenomenon that cannot be explained when it/[the matter] affects/concerns people we love, unless they have done something despicable, something that [distorts the most remote parts of our ourself to the ground]/shakes us to the core, destroying and perverting all that we are/[what makes us be us]. Although not everything can be forgotten, *yet the truth still serves better… * you can use either 'although' at the start or 'yet' in the second phrase, but not both
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...A sweet lie or a bitter truth?
A few thoughts that have been inspired by a recent film I'd watched:[Every last one of us has]/We have all been in a situation where we had to choose what to say to people we *hold dear. [*present tense unless the person is no longer alive, or we no longer have the same feelings towards them] Realizing that the truth might hurt, most of us decided to say sweet lies in order to protect them from being disappointed. But was is that so? I mean, were we really trying to protect them? No! Quite the contrary, we were erecting a wall of lies to hide ourselves from their disappointed eyes. But for how long can the wall could resist the truth that, no matter what, wantsed /tries to break through outside, (so) thoroughly avoiding all the [traps]/barriers/obstacles/defences we haved laid on in its way? And the more we were defending/we defend our lie, the more walls were being/are built; and eventually, it was/is already not a few walls, but a labyrinth, from which even we could/can not see a way through. * this can all be written in the present, as indicated - past/present ; it's not necessary but it gives more of a sense of universality
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