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My last trip Among several places I have travelled to I want to talk about my last trip. In that trip we travelled to Mesr desert which is located in Isfahan province of Iran. It took us around 10 hours to get there by our personal cars. It was 12 of us including my husband’s coworker and their spouses. When we arrived there we stayed at a cozy, mesmerizing hotel. Mesr was surrounded by vas picturesque desert. The weather was scorchingly hot during the day when sun was shining unbroken. However it was nippy cold during nights. We went to camel riding which made me frightened at first. Moreover we experienced Safari riding which was so hilarious. The driver drove with a very high speed through up and down of Mesr sandy hills. After the Safari riding a friend of us realized that he had his bag left at the car. During the trip I learned about new ways of igniting fire and the shapes drawn with adjacent stars. I used to enjoy watching stars and meteors during the tranquil night of the desert. The scenery was breathtaking.

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Among the several places I have travelled to, I want to talk about my last trip. In that trip we travelled to the Mesr desert which is located in the Isfahan province of Iran. It took us around 10 hours to get there by our (personal) cars. It was 12 of us,including my husband’s coworkers and their spouses. When we arrived there, we stayed at a cozy, mesmerizing hotel. Mesr was surrounded by a vast picturesque desert. The weather was scorching(ly) hot during the day (when sun was shining) unbroken. However it was (nippy) cold during nights. We went to camel riding which made me frightened me at first. Moreover we experienced went Safari riding which was so hilarious. The driver drove with at a very high speed through up and down of the Mesr's sandy hills. After the Safari riding, a friend of us ours realized that he had left his bag left at the car. During the trip I learned about new ways of igniting fire and the shapes drawn with by adjacent stars. I used to enjoy enjoyed watching the stars and meteors during the tranquil night of the desert. The scenery was breathtaking.

Your vocabulary is great! Just work a little on your sentence structuring and tenses and youll be golden. lran sounds amazing :-)

The parantheses are there to signify that while it may be correct grammatically, it does not sound natural as that may be repetitive or just sound off. You can say it felt nippy as that ltself explains that it is already cold, same with the day.

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