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Angélica friend. I miss you a lot. How are you and your husband? And your plans to have babies ? At the moment, I am working a lot on my two jobs in the hospitals and I am working as a lawyer too. This month, I changed the sector in the hospital and now I take care of women and not of serious newborn. Next December, I`m going to finish one more module of my English course an I`m going also deliver my project to my tutor in my postgraduate course. How was your last trip to Miami? In my last trips I know some beaches of Santa Catarina, they are beautiful. This year was difficult financially in Brazil and I could not go to the northeast. Did you know the northeast when you were still here? But, in my next vacations, I intend to go the Bruxelas to visit my niece, because she recently moved. And I`m going to see Europe. I deserve it because this year was very hard. Goodbye.

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Angélica friend.

I miss you a lot. How are you and your husband? And your plans to have babies?
At the moment, I am working a lot on my two jobs in the hospitals and I am working as a lawyer too.
This month, I changed the moved to a different sector in the hospital and now I take care of women and not of serious newborns.
Next December, I'm going to finish one more module of my English course and I'm going also deliver my project to my tutor in for my postgraduate course.
How was your last trip to Miami? In my last From my previous trips I know have visited some beaches of in Santa Catarina, they are beautiful. This year was difficult financially in Brazil and so I could not go to the northeast. Did you know Have you visited the northeast when you were still during your time here?
But, in for my next vacations, I intend to go the Bruxelas to visit my niece, because she recently moved there. And I'm going to see Europe. I deserve it because this year was very hard. Goodbye.

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