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Writing about traffic in my city, Any help with the grammar? Thanks In modern life cars play an important role in daily activities. Cars make our life convenient and meanwhile it has it's own drawbacks as well such as pollution, traffic and noise. In Arrecife we have a big problem with the traffic but it is also the same problem with the public transport. If we ban the cars, then all the drivers should start to use it. However, these days the increment of the passenger number would increase the problems of punctuality and currently the highways is badly planned. Government shouldn't banned cars in city center because a large group of people live and work in this area not in country side In My point of view, they should be building multi-story parking spaces we can reduce the traffic problem because many cars are waiting and rounding to find a parking space which makes traffic jam or by using clean fuels however we know our climate is changing, and time is running out to take thoughtful action. I have discovered a very basic truth – cycling or walking to work is a much more pleasant experience that results in a greater level of happiness When people are happier due to exercise from commuting, they are more productive, and less likely to become stressed, anxious, or depressed. To sum up, in my opinion it's not essential to ban cars. Government can train people about using cars. It will be beneficial specially if they train children who are our next generation. They should spread using bicycles instead of cars in some hectic areas.

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Writing about Traffic in my City, Any help with the grammar? Thanks

In modern life cars play an important role in daily activities. Cars make our life convenient. Meanwhile it has it's own drawbacks as well such as pollution, traffic and noise.
In Arrecife we have a big major problem with the traffic but it is also the same problem with the public transport.
If we ban the cars, then all the drivers should start to use it. However, these days the increase increment of the passengers number would increase the problems of punctuality and currently the highways is badly poorly planned. Government shouldn't ban cars in the city center because a large number group of people live and work in this area not in the countryside
In my point of view, they should be building multi-story parking spaces so we can reduce the traffic problem because many cars are waiting and driving  around to find a parking space which makes causes traffic jams. or By using clean fuels however,  we know our that climate is changing, and time is running out to take thoughtful action. I have discovered a very basic truth – cycling or walking to work is a much more pleasant experience that results in a greater level of happiness. When people are happier due to exercise from commuting, they are more productive, and less likely to become stressed, anxious, or depressed.
To sum up, in my opinion it's not essential to ban cars. Government can train people about on using cars efficiently. It will be beneficial specially if they train children who are our next generation. They should introduce the use of  spread using bicycles instead of cars in some hectic areas.

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