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I do not think that people nowadays recycle enough of their household waste. I agree that introduce a recycling law as a legal obligation would be a good scheme. But honestly that's not the only approach that the government should consider.
In my opinion, new legislation to force people to do recycling is quite effective. Divided to leftover, cans, papers, poly and litter, separated and placed in different bins on weekly basis, the waste most be tackled stricter. This law is supposed to help cleaners finish their tasks faster and more accurate. There should be penalties for citizens who fail to abide by the law, ranging from fine, public services, perhaps prison sentences for repeat offenders. This measure would act as a deterrent to householders, and gradually grow sense of responsibility on people's mind.
Education, on the other hand, should also be put under the spotlight. Many do not recycle thoroughly owing to the fact that they can not picture the impact these waste would create to flora and fauna. In the light of this, it is significant to introduce courses about how we interact with environment in elementary and junior high school. Teach the pupils the ethnic we should follow and act accordingly and firmly. In this case, this concept would be rooted.
To sum up, maybe we do need to make recycling law as legal requirement. However, this is definitely not the only way to make people dispose their waste more responsibly.
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I do not think that people nowadays recycle enough of their household waste. I agree that introducing a recycling law as a legal obligation would be a good scheme. But honestly that's not the only approach that the government should consider.In my opinion, new legislation to force people to do recycling recycle is quite effective. Divided into leftover, cans, papers, poly and litter, separated and placed in different bins on weekly basis, the waste mostmust be tackled stricter more strictly. This law is supposed to help cleaners finish their tasks faster and more accurate more quickly and accurately. There should be penalties for citizens who fail to abide by the law, ranging from fines, public services, and perhaps prison sentences for repeat offenders. This measure would act as a deterrent to householders homeowners, and gradually grow create a sense of responsibility on in people's minds.
Education, on the other hand, should also be put under the spotlight. Many do not recycle thoroughly owing to the fact that they can not picture the impact that this these waste would create to flora and fauna. In the light of this, it is significant important to introduce courses about how we interact with the environment in elementary and junior high school. Teaching the pupils the ethnic ethics we should follow and will allow them to act accordingly and firmly (what do you mean by firmly?). In this case doing so, this concept would be rooted (better: strengthened, planted).
To sum up In summary, maybe we do need to make recycling law as a legal requirement. However, this is definitely not the only way to make people dispose of their waste more responsibly.
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