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Why do people learn foreign languages? I would appreciate any corrections and suggestions for improvement. *** Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. *** When it comes to reasons behind learning a second language, diverse opinions exist. While some argue that people learn other languages only to be able to work or travel to other countries, I believe there are far more reasons behind learning a foreign language. It is obvious that being literate in a second language such as English, opens doors to employment opportunities in English speaking countries. A case in point is the countless number of high demand jobs in countries like Australia and Canada where immigrants can only apply for these positions if they can prove their English language proficiency. Apart from this, travelling to other countries could be very challenging if a traveller does not know a second widely spoken language. Having travelled to various parts of the world, I have seen the various problems that travellers could face if they fail to communicate in a second language. Despite the above-mentioned reasons behind learning a second language, I believe that there are other reasons why some take part in language courses. Nowadays, the English language has become a global second language. This has meant that most important textbooks and academic journals are now published in English meaning that researchers and students need to know this language if they wish to succeed in their area of study. Furthermore, the internet has enabled people to have access to forums and social network sites that have members from all around the world. Therefore, in order to be able to share opinions, ask questions and take part in a discussion, members should be able to communicate in a language that everyone understands it which is another reason why knowing is a second language is useful. In conclusion, although a foreign language is beneficial for finding jobs and visiting other countries, in my opinion, knowing a second language offer other benefits that are just as advantageous.

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When it comes to the reasons behind learning a second language, diverse opinions exist. While some argue that people learn other languages only to be able to work in or travel to other countries, I believe there are far more reasons behind learning a foreign language.


It is obvious that being fluent (1) in a second language such as English, opens doors to employment opportunities in English-speaking countries. A case in point is the countless number of high demand (2) jobs in countries like Australia and Canada, where immigrants can only apply for those positions if they can prove their English language proficiency. Apart from this, travelling to other countries can prove very challenging if a traveller does not know a second widely spoken language. Having travelled to various parts of the world, I have seen the various problems that travellers could face if they are unable to communicate in a second language.

Despite the above-mentioned reasons behind learning a second language, I believe that there are also other reasons why some take part in language courses. Nowadays, the English language has become a global lingua franca. This has meant that most important textbooks and academic journals are now published in English, meaning that researchers and students need to know this language if they wish to succeed in their area of study. Furthermore, the internet has enabled people to have access to forums and social network sites that have members from all around the world. Therefore, in order to be able to share opinions, ask questions and take part in a discussions, members need to be able to communicate in a language that everyone understands,  it which is another reason why knowing is a second language is useful.

In conclusion, although a foreign language is beneficial for finding jobs and visiting other countries, in my opinion, knowing a second language also offers other benefits that are just as advantageous.

(1) Being literate means being able to read and write. Being fluent means being able to talk and listen. We would normally say "fluent" in this context. However, since English uses a different alphabet to Persian, from your perspective (or the perspective of anyone whose language doesn't use the Latin alphabet) I suppose it does also make sense to say "literate". 

(2) I am not sure what you mean. "Demand" is normally a noun, not an adjective, so it doesn't seem to make sense here for "high demand" to be modifying "jobs". Do you mean "highly demanding jobs"? Or do you mean "high demand for jobs"? Or are you saying "high demand jobs" in the sense of jobs that are in high demand?

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